LUCY
GRANT
Stats
for my copy:
Kindle edition, 2019.
How
acquired:
Via NetGalley.
(For
the Goodreads synopsis, scroll to the bottom of this post.)
My
thoughts:
This book is horrible. I rarely write bad reviews, especially for
newly published books or debuting authors. But all the other reviews
on Amazon - all five of them - are five star reviews. I can only
assume the reviewers are either friends of the author, or pseudo
reviewers who trade glowing reviews for free books. So I feel honor
bound to warn others.
Since
I got my copy via NetGalley it may be an ARC, and you have to make
allowances for some editing errors in those. But even an uncorrected
proof should not be this bad. On one page, in the space of three
short paragraphs, the word “walked” appeared five times. She
walked to the table...she walked outside...he walked out, then walked
back in, then walked out again. Too much! And that’s just one
example.
The
premise is interesting, if a little far fetched. It’s what made me
want to read the book. Grace has worked in her grandfather’s
feedlot since she was a teenager, and supervises his ranch hands.
(Though I find it hard to believe her claim that her name was on more
contracts than her grandfather’s when she was fifteen. In what
state can a fifteen year old sign contracts?) Grandpa dies and leaves
her money, but leaves the ranch and all his business to her brothers,
because she needs to get off the ranch, go to college and get
married. So she contests his will on the grounds that she was
excluded because she's a woman. Except throughout the book it’s
referred to as “protesting” the will. Well, maybe in the state
she lives that is the legal term but when I googled “protest will”
everything came up as “contest”. But what do I know.
I pretty much hated Grace. I get that she was terribly upset at the way her grandfather (who I also hated) screwed her out of his will, but good god, that's no reason to act like a spoiled child. I hated the way she used Mason. She admits to herself over and over that she is using him and expresses guilt, but then she just continues to use him. And I'm not a prude, I have no problem with characters cussing, but the nasty things Grace and her brother yelled at each really turned me off. Again, there's no reason to act like a spoiled child.
I pretty much hated Grace. I get that she was terribly upset at the way her grandfather (who I also hated) screwed her out of his will, but good god, that's no reason to act like a spoiled child. I hated the way she used Mason. She admits to herself over and over that she is using him and expresses guilt, but then she just continues to use him. And I'm not a prude, I have no problem with characters cussing, but the nasty things Grace and her brother yelled at each really turned me off. Again, there's no reason to act like a spoiled child.
And
that interesting premise? At the end of the book is a twist in
grandpa’s will, that just ruined the whole premise and made
everything pointless. And then there's another twist, that was also
pointless.
Goodreads
synopsis: Lawsuits,
rivalry, revenge... Welcome to the family.Grace has always been a
fighter. As single woman running one of the most successful cattle
ranches in the country, she's had to deal with surly ranch hands,
crooked lawyers, jealous siblings... It's a full time job, but that
hasn't stopped Grace from enjoying some no-strings-attached fun with
a smoking hot country boy who's madly in love with her...Then tragedy
strikes. Grace's grandfather passes away, and her entire life is
turned upside down. Adam, her power-hungry brother, inherits the
ranch, and kicks Grace off the property. The young woman soon finds
herself in the fight of her life, as she struggles preserve what
she's built, and maintain her grandfather's legacy.As the ranch
suffers from Adam's corrupt mismanagement, their legal battle takes a
dark turn into threats and violence. Grace refuses to back down, and
she's willing to use every dirty trick in the book to protect what's
hers...But when she pushes her conniving brother too far, will
another tragedy rock her family?Get ready for a romantic thriller
packed with shocking twists, edge- of-your-seat suspense, steamy sex,
and a surprise ending you'll never see coming.